dbp:reason
- Significant proportion of citations, especially in first few sections, are to sources from the early nineteenth century written by people closely involved in the events . These are primary sources, and the section extrapolates from those primary sources to posit original research about the sources and their meaning, e. g. the textual comparison of different versions of accounts cited to nothing but the accounts themselves rather than to textual scholarship of the accounts, etc. Summarizing secondary scholarship—summarizing the Moroni story, about the reception history of the Moroni figure, about analyzing depictions like statues, etc.—would improve the article. (en)