XML POinter Language Version 1 (June 7th, 2000) from Eve L. Maler on 2000-07-07 (www-xml-linking-comments@w3.org from July to September 2000) (original) (raw)
Date: Thu, 06 Jul 2000 16:58:38 -0400 From: Jeffrey Bacon <Jeffrey.Bacon@canada.sun.com> X-Mailer: Mozilla 4.73 [en] (WinNT; U) X-Accept-Language: en To: Eve.Maler@East.Sun.COM Subject: XML POinter Language Version 1 (June 7th, 2000)
Eve --
I have just finished reading the Candidate Recommendation for XPointer dated 7 June 2000 and found a couple editorial errors.
1 Section 5.4.2 string-range() Function, example 2: ... the following expression returns ... from the start of the
string) in the third occurrence... Example Given: string-range(//P,"Thomas Pynchon",8,0)[17]
Shouldn't the [17] be [3] ?
2 Section 5.4.2 string-range() Function, example 3: ... Alternatively this could be specified as follows: (this referring to the above example) string-range(string-range(//P,"Thomas Pynchon")[17],"P",1,0)
Again, shouldn't the [17] be [3] ?
3 Section 5.4.6 unique Predicate Function paragraph 2 beneath the count()=1 example: ... set of smaller locations, as opposed to the range the covers the
same total...
Shouldn't it be written (range THE covers -> range THAT covers): ... set of smaller locations, as opposed to the range that covers the same total...
-- Jeffrey Bacon
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