minor comments for WD-xptr-20010108 from Susan Lesch on 2001-01-15 (www-xml-linking-comments@w3.org from January to March 2001) (original) (raw)

Here are just a few minor comments on your Last Call Working Draft of XPointer [1].

The RFC 2119 key words are listed under 3, but are used throughout. Would it make more sense to place that definition under 1.2?

In 4.2.1 and 5.4.2, whitespace -> white space (if you want to follow XML 1.0, see http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#sec-white-space).

In A.2 References, I imagine that you will update the editors and date of XIS.

Deleting rowspan="1" colspan="1", and the thead and tbody elements from the tables in 4.1.3 will save a few bytes in file size. Is there some kind of production script that inserts these? It's hardly a problem in XPointer, but adds up in other XML specs with more tables.

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/WD-xptr-20010108/

Best wishes for your project,

-- Susan Lesch - mailto:lesch@w3.org tel:+1.858.483.4819 World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) - http://www.w3.org/

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