Asylum RPG (original) (raw)

Q: This bio makes it hurt to live. Read on true believer.

PLAYER INFO
Name: Letiece White

Neo: mmmm bio. Mmmmm bio Letiece.

Where are you From: New York
Age: 13

Q: Dear god she's 13- we're all fucked! We don't have anything against age- as long as you are mature. But dear god!

Email: powrpuffgirl927@aol.com

Q: This screams child.

AIM/ICQ:
RPG Experience: I am on a vampire RPG now

Q: I repeat we're all fucked.

Sailor moon Knowledge: I’ve seen all the sailor moon series except
Sailor Stars Season
Web page:
How did you hear of the AsylumRPG?: Google
What interested you, why do you want to play?: Well I like RPG’s
and I like Sailormoon so I decided to try it out

CHARACTER INFO
Character You're applying for: EternalSaturn/Himura Sequenity

Q: She didn't a Naoko character- thats explicitly in the rules. So technically this is an auto-reject.

Neo: Saturn is already being played. The other senshi haven't reached eternal yet... AND she doesn't give any explination at all how she's SATURN related. It hurts.

Senshi name: EternalSaturn
Civilian name: Himura Sequenity
Age:3000

Q: Does that imply she looks 3000 years old?

Neo: 3000 year old women fighting crime in a skin tight bodess... But it gets better.

Hometown/Home Planet: Saturn

Neo: Alright. Now- why does Saturn have two senshi?

Q: The only plausable reason I can think of is when Hotaru became Mistress Saturn her starseed went out much like Galaxia and took a new vessel. However thats not explained here so no luck.

Neo: Yes, we don't need any chibichibi complexes here... oh dear god NO!

Birthday: September 27
Sign: Libra
Eyes: Infer red

Neo: Sooo- is that red with yellow with orange with green with blue with white? You sunk my battle ship! do... do... do... do...

Q: At first I thought she misspelled "inferno" but I put the two together and got "infra red". She sees like Jordie Laforge.

Neo: She can't take much more cap'n!

Hair: Silver

Q: Non descript.

Neo: Tin foil head! Alright it's anime- but still. Is it silver grey? metallic silver? gun metal silver? TINFOIL silver??

Height:5’ 10”
Personality: She seems like a happy-go-lucky girl or so she seems.

Neo: She seems alot.

Q: En-seem-ed.

(who is one of eleven siblings.).

Q: At first I read that as eleven and then I thought I miss read it as "elven" which could make the bio better or worse depending. It would explain.. alot.

Neo: Period period.

She is very protective of her
youngest brother Salvont who always gets into trouble.

Neo: Solvent.

Q: I think it's suppose to be "Sal-von"

Neo: She could remove paint with her brother!

She has no friends.

Neo: well being a 3000 year old 5'10" girl with bright tin foil hair, infra red eyes and Solvent for a brother- I don't blame em!

She an outsider that goes to school and sits by herself but
if she trusts you you’ll see her true side and you’ll have a
friend for life … Most likely.

Q: Dude, punctuation.

Neo: She an outsider. You an outsider. WE an outsider!

Q: Well she's only 13 she might not have her period yet.

Neo: Baaaad punctuation joke.

SENSHI APPEARANCE
Eyes: Crimson Red

Neo: From infra red to crimson. Pain. Does she get dizzy going from infra red to normal red?

Hair: Silver

Neo: Frying pan silver.

General appearance: An angel with bat like wings with a wing-span of
20 miles

Neo: When we got here reading the bio- all seriousness left. C'mon! This can't be a real bio. TWENTY MILES! She'd crush all of Crystal Tokyo with one flap! People would DIE if she flew away! cars, crushing, death, havok! AND APPARENTLY EVERYONE IS OK WITH THIS!!

Q: I thought it was a mix up. Nooo.

Fuku Description: She has a tang top that is black and a mini skirt
that is red.

Q: mmmm tang. *liiiick*

Neo: Her fuku is black juice mix and a mini skirt... She's like some new inovated trolop. BEWARE SUPER HO!

Her sword is across her back and she has a darkness
dragon going down and gets longer with every battle she fights until
she masters it as an attack.

Q: If its across her back assuming the hilt is by her shoulder and the blade is by her hip- how does she fly?
As for the dragon- she has a pesronal status bar.

Neo: Well assumidly she's a trolop, its no surprise she has a black dragon randomly going down with her.

THE BASICS
Talents: She can play the piano and sing.

Q: Like every Mary sue

Inability: She can’t trust many people and she has four ears which
really hurt and drives her crazy when someone is yelling or is
screaming very high.

Q: The only redeaming factor is I want Narky to do Jackel's Cry.

Neo: *laugh laugh laugh laugh!* ok, she's 5'10", 20 mile wing span, tin foil hair, sunk my battle ship eyes, 3000 year old trolop with black juice mix randomly powdered over her chest, going down with her dragon status bar pimp. ewwwww....

Future dream: To have a family.

Q: With her dragon.

Neo: Well in her line of work- this should be no problem.

Q: I thinks he's sniffing the Solvent fumes.

Goals/purpose: To find her place in life

Q: I think it would be better to find a home first.

Neo: I don't think theres ANY place in the Universe for her.

Friends: Nakatenshi her pet wolf she found.

Q: Apparently she's not friends with her brother, or her dragon.

Neo: Dragon AND a wolf... oh dear god.

Foes: Her father and all her siblings except her 2 youngest bro’s
and her twin Kim.

Neo: But she's not friends with them. Not even Solvent whom she keeps out of trouble.. newp. Not friends

Inner personality: A hurt girl looking for someplace she belongs but
is shattered because the place she wants to go to a place of love but
all she finds is pain and sorrow.

Q: I think she flew into a plane.

Neo: Is she speaking English anymore? I think she just started plucking random words that sounded pretty.

Q: She can't go to this place of love because she can't fit in a door.

SENSHI
Element: Darkness

Neo: With frying pan coloured hair and infra red eyes...

Talismen/weapon: A long sword.
Henshin(Transformation) Object and Phrase: A locket that plays the
lullaby her mama sang to her as she shout ‘Eternal Saturn
Darkness’

Neo: Disfunctional family indeed.

Strength: The dark and night
Weakness: The light and mornings

Q: What we mean by that is what can they do well.

Neo: soooo... if I shot her in the head.. would the bullet ricochette off her metallic head, off her sword, off her nose, off her four ears like a pin ball and into some random civillian's EYE? What if I took a flash light? pointed it at her face? and clicked it off and on like some crazy disco light? Would she melt?

History: She lives on the streets in an alley with Salvont.

Q: She can't fit in the alley with her wings! I mean picture this- the shoulders of them would be poking out pass the tops of buildings. "I want to be alone" wings poked out, "no one will find me here" wings poked.

Her mom (Which she doesn’t know she’s dead until later) had to abandon
her and Salvont in fear of their lives. She remember who the killer
was. Which is her own father. Her mom couldn’t divorce because that
would be a crime and the penalty was death!

Neo: Apparently divorce is a crime with the penalty of death on Saturn... um.. NO.

Q: Actually, yes, lets assume that Saturn missed her mother so much that to keep people from having the pain of just one parent she made it against the law to divorce. However the pently is a bit much but she's the senshi of death and silence, its the planet of death, theres death all around- yay! But, since she didn't say that, no.

Neo: An alley... with a wolf, with Solvent, with a dragon, with four ears, TWENTY MILE wing span, sword, eye blinding hair, do... do... do... eyes AND she goes to school.. 3000 year old child whose 5'10" tall and dresses like a skank. How do YOU think she puts food on the table?

She hates her father and
searches for her mother. She only trust one other of her siblings.
Kim. Her twin.

Neo: Poor Solvent. Cuz ya know, they're not friends.

That still didn’t change even after she found a wolf
puppy in the alley and turned her locket which is the only thing she
has of her mother into her locket.

Neo: She doesn't trust the wolf who turned her locket into her locket..? Thats a talented situation.

Q: Talented wolf.

She remembers very little things of her past in the silver millennium except Blue-eyed ,blonde with a red bow and a white cat and the ways she died.

Neo: Blue eyed blonde what? Is the blonde coloured blue eyed? or... the bow? and cat.. and who died more than once??

ATTACKS
Attack one: Saturn darkness surround!
She yells this when the fight is during the day so the fight could be
to her advantage. She holds her hands above her hands a black orb and
spins until the battle arena is pitch black

Neo: Ok- how many hands?
*Q and Neo try to demonstrate the move*
Q: What about the orb? random black orb.
Neo: Hands and spinning- sweet bleeding jesus.

Attack two: Dragon deadly kiss!
She yells this and the dragon painted on her sword attacks the enemy.
The reason she yells Dragon kiss because the dragon gives a poisonous
and deadly kiss.

Q: Is it just me- or is she mix matching names?

Neo: I'm reminded of YuYuHakusho's Hiei. Ok, so her dragons a skank too.

Attack three : Darkness Sword Strike!
Her swords glows dark red and she strikes the target with one deadly
blow.

Q: So she's all powerful. Mary Sue.

Neo: ok yea, DEFINATLY reminded of YYH.

Extra details: That wolf puppy she found is her pet her name is
nakatenshi which goes back to the Kenyans meaning ‘The chosen
one’

Q: Sounds Japanese to me. That and someone found 2000names.com

Neo: Dejavu. She already said this.

Picture url if available: L Don’t have one

Neo: L happy you don't.

Q: L is empoverish.

Writing sample: “Why me?” I thought, “Why? Am I the one to
suffer?

Q: Why us.

Neo: I don't want to live anymore!

Q: Slings and arrows! Slings and FUCKING arrows!

I mean I barely remember anything about my life and I have to
watch Salvont and that’s no easy task.”

Neo: Its like watching paint peel.

as she looked at he
brother sleeping form. “ Well at least it isn’t raining” I said.

Neo: *RAINS!*

All of a sudden out of nowhere came rain.

Neo: I can tell the future!!!

“ Oh joy! I just had to say something.”

Neo: Gotta break the ice after the rain, eh?

I thought as I lifted up Salvont and put him in the bow I had just in case it rains.

Q: Purdy lil Solvent, in a purdy lil bow!

Neo: Pull the string taunt, ready, aim- FIRE LIL BROTHER!

He stirred a little and had trouble going back to sleep. So I sang him mom’s lullaby.

Neo: The one she sings at you when you randomly scream your transformation phrase.

Hush now
My baby
By still love don’t cry
Sleep like you’re rocked by the sea
Sleep and remember my last lullaby
So I’ll be with you
When you dream
Drift on a river that flows through my arms
Drift as I’m singing to you
I see you smiling so peaceful and calm
And holding you I’m smiling too.

Q: Ok, they took this from Prince of Egypt. Its one thing to have a crappy lullaby but when its a crappy lullaby that you've stolen- then its twice as crappy. You think that no one would notice?? DUDE!

“I remember this lullaby.

Q: Obviously, you just sang it you moron.

It helps me soothe my nerves. Nakatenshi
knows this. I mean she is my best friend after all. My only friend
actually.

Neo: No one likes Solvent! What has Solvent done to you??

She never tells my secrets.

Neo: She's a WOLF PUP....

Q: Cuz ya know, that 20 mile wing span and four ears don't give away anything.

I just wish more people could be like her.

Q: Hairy and smelling everyone's butt.

Neo: Peeing on fire hydrents and licking their self in public.

Instead of mocking me because I live on the streets.

Neo: And go to school... Dude, thats raunchy.

That’s How I wind up into gang fights. They say I’m a crypt but
in reality I’m a nobody in this game called life.” I thought as I
slept.

Q: Either she's trying to be deep and use interesting words or the gang members are really stupid. Cuz every crypt has a 20 mile wing span, a wolf pup, four ears and goes to school.

Neo: Duh. I seem them everyday. Don't you?

Q: No I'm not cool enough to see crypts.

Neo: Psh. Loser.

Dream

Neo: Random dream sequence! You forgot the "wobbly wobbly wobbly!"

“NO!” yelled a woman with Silver hair and red eyes. She was
very pale and well built.

Q: Poor girl, she's stuck in this bio too.

Obviously She was someone to mess with by her bod.

Neo: I'm someone to mess with by my bod. Are you someone to mess with by your bod, Q?

But her looks were something else. Any guy would trip and
fall head over heels for her.” <--- random quote .“WHY?! WHAT DID THEY EVER DO TO
YOU! THEY’RE ONLY CHILDREN.” . “WHAT DID THEY EVER DO ?! I’LL
TELL YOU THEY’VE BEEN NOTHING BUT TROUBLE! THAT’S ALL. SINCE
I’M YOUR HUSBAIND

Q: Then you shouldn't have gotten your wick waxed man.

Neo: In other news the Social Services building was bombed yesterday. This has caused a large amount of chaos- in which familys have been made to dictate their own government... This method has proved unsuccessful and bred a whole new species of human- the "Mary Sue".

I’LL GIVE YOU ONE DAY TO PACK AND KILL THOSE
KIDS AND THEN LEAVE AND NEVER COME BACK UNTIL YOU STRAINTED OUT

Neo: *head meets desk several times over* spell check... speeeeell check.. Its one person talking to themselves isn't it? They're all nuts! Theres something in the water thats mutating our youth and making them believe they're from Saturn!
Apparently its against the law by penalty of death to devorce- but apparently its ok to kill your kids when they're an inconvience.

UNDERSTAND!” No reply ”I ASKED A QUESTION WOMAN!”
He yelled as he punch her in her stomach. ”I don’t know what I
ever seen in you.” she said dangerously low and calm which was
never a good sign. She quickly upper-cutted him the punched him in
his temples and knock him out.
“ Sequenity! Salvont! Pack your stuff! We’re going on a
trip!” the woman said. “What about daddy and everybody else?” I
asked “ They’re to busy to go I……

Neo: Miss quote. If found- return to ... fuck it who cares.

Q: Why did she only save those two?

Reality

Neo: Thankyou for detouring the two.

My eyes flew open as the sun hit my eyes.

Neo: She has a tendency to start and end with her nouns.

I got up and went into a dark corner until the morning ended .

Q: She's going to be late for school. She doesn't have much going for her. She really shouldn't be late for school.

That dream still haunts me and I still can’t figure out the rest of my life. What did a white cat, a blue-eyed blonde with a red bow, a woman with silver hair and red-eyes, And me dying fit together?

Neo: THEY DONT!!!

Q: A bad, bad, horrible bio. We're done, goodnight.