Love comes and goes by fear-the-brilliance on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

⭐⭐⭐⭐ Overall

⭐⭐⭐⭐:star-half: Vision

⭐⭐⭐⭐:star-half: Originality

⭐⭐⭐⭐:star-half: Technique

⭐⭐⭐⭐:star-empty: Impact

There really isn't much to critique here, it's very good! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> I do love the color choices, because for some reason the steriotypical colors of blue for a guy and pink for a girl seem perfect in emotes! xD I like the shade of blue you used too, it's nice and unique!

Your shading is very great, and it makes the faces pop! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

One thing to say: the crack in the heart seems a little bit too nondescript, so it would help to maybe have the line black. Or, if you wanted to revamp this emote, you could make it so the blue emote is holding half of a heart and the other half is on the ground. Pink comes in and picks up the other half. They put the heart together, but then it cracks and breaks. Pink puts down her half, leaves and the loop continues! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Great work!