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110 110 ## Collaborator Nominations
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112 -Any existing Collaborator can nominate an individual making significant
113 -and valuable contributions across the Node.js organization to become a new
114 -Collaborator.
112 +Existing Collaborators can nominate someone to become a Collaborator. Nominees
113 +should have significant and valuable contributions across the Node.js
114 +organization.
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116 -To nominate a new Collaborator, open an issue in the [nodejs/node][]
117 -repository, with a summary of the nominee's contributions, for example:
116 +To nominate a new Collaborator, open an issue in the [nodejs/node][] repository.
117 +Provide a summary of the nominee's contributions. For example:
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119 119 * Commits in the [nodejs/node][] repository.
120 120 * Can be shown using the link