Homemade Manga!'s Journal (original) (raw)

sorry im new to this but heres a better version [27 Jun 2012|09:05pm]
the manga im making is about angel and demons differnt demensionsthere a lot of demensions the angel dem. the demon dem. the earth dem. celestial dem.the dem. of the godsthe angels and demons were once one god but split in to different beingsthe 2 founders of the village in the celestial realm were angel and demonthey were best friends turned enemies they fought at the earth realm and was never heard from again the 2 main characters trakes and satoshi are decendants from them trakes zubachi from the great zubachi clan and satoshi zarkoski from the great zarkoski clanthe zarkoski clan was massacared by the zubachi clan and on the same night trakes lost control of his demon side and killed all of his clan after that trakes and satoshi became best friend until they went to the academy to become gardians gardians protect people in the earth realm from evil people like the assasin the assasins are a group of exiled gardians that tried to obtain dark powers. there are ranks of gardiansfirst of is fledgeling the lowest just graduated from schoolsecond is protecter to gain this rank u have to take the proctecter exams with your teamthird is the sentenal they go on hard missions or take a team of fledgelingsfourth is the red gaurd wich sole purpose is to protect the leader of the villagefith is celestail black ops which does the dirty work for the villegelastly there is the celestail the leader of the village. well anyways while at the academy trakes becomes top student while satoshi follows behind him. on graduation day they are put as leaders of 2 sepatate teams to capture the others leader they go all out and destroy the training course after that they are placed on a team with each other and a girl named reana who is madly in love with trakes but satoshi loves reana and trakes is trying to get power to kill the one who killed his clan because he has no memory that he did because of the seal that activates when an angel or demon awakeins thier powersthier teams leader is lady named kyga she can use force feilds at will thier first mission is to go to the earth realm to protect a girl that is adecendant from the godson thier way to the earth realm they are are ambushed by by assasins trakes and satishi use their angel/demon powers for the first time and wwin the battle while in the earht realm they spend months thiear fighting epic battles the next main battle happens after while they were walkin home from the school they had to go to protect the girl name kitomithey were attacked by high level assasins and a angel with blindfolds over his eyes with one wing too after the battle trakes has to make a decsion save reana or save kitomi in the end he chooses kitomi when she is about to get stabed he jumps the way and takes the hit to the shoulder then kills the assasins before losing concieness he see black feathers the same ones as his clans murderer kitomi takes him to her house to help him while hes recover they slowely strt to fall in love wich is forbiiden for trakes becuase she lives in the unholy earht realm after everyone is healed the team heads back to the celestial realm for the protecter exams ( think of narutos chunin exams its like that) in the 2nd part of the exam wich is the survival part trakes meets the leader of the assasins who places a seal over his seal to control his demonic powers that when trakes finds out hes a demon ( satostoshi found out he was an angel by the one winged angel they fought)during the 3rd exam which is one on one fights trakes fights his older brother who was away on a mission during the massure he vowed to kill trakes for what he did in the end trakes gets half of his heart destroyed while his brother sadoko gets all of his heart destroyed this happens all in front of eveybody and trakes nephew sadokos son who then vows to kill trakes for his dad. during the final match wich is trakes vs satoshi theyre pwers collide wich teleports them to the same place there ancestors fought thats when trakes tells satoshi hes leaving to join the assasins and thats when the battle becomes emotionally crazy(and evey body from the exams are watching from the big screen becuse the screen homes in on the persons energy) during the conclusion of the fight trakes stabbes satoshi in the heart wich activates his full angel form which satoshi then starts to beat the crap out of trakes who then activates his full demon form in wich they stand on 2 differnt sky scapers oppisite from each other they charge up theyre final atack trakes uses lunar eclipes and satoshis uses solar shine they attacks collide and trakes is thrown into a buildin which collapses and satoshi is thrown in to a waterfall trakes then leaves to train for 3 year in the demon real and satoshi train for 3 years in the angel realm .... the end of the first series sorry i skipped a lot of other things and im going to add more stuff but please comment and when trakes uses his demon powers he slowly either slowly goes insane or his alter ego takes over CCF06222012_00000 (2)CCF06222012_000004
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new manga [27 Jun 2012|08:54pm]
[ **mood** | anxious ] the manga im making is about angel and demons differnt demensionsthere a lot of demensions the angel dem. the demon dem. the earth dem. celestial dem.the dem. of the godsthe angels and demons were once one god but split in to different beingsthe 2 founders of the village in the celestial realm were angel and demonthey were best friends turned enemies they fought at the earth realm and was never heard from again the 2 main characters trakes and satoshi are decendants from them trakes zubachi from the great zubachi clan and satoshi zarkoski from the great zarkoski clanthe zarkoski clan was massacared by the zubachi clan and on the same night trakes lost control of his demon side and killed all of his clan after that trakes and satoshi became best friend until they went to the academy to become gardians gardians protect people in the earth realm from evil people like the assasin the assasins are a group of exiled gardians that tried to obtain dark powers. there are ranks of gardiansfirst of is fledgeling the lowest just graduated from schoolsecond is protecter to gain this rank u have to take the proctecter exams with your teamthird is the sentenal they go on hard missions or take a team of fledgelingsfourth is the red gaurd wich sole purpose is to protect the leader of the villagefith is celestail black ops which does the dirty work for the villegelastly there is the celestail the leader of the village. well anyways while at the academy trakes becomes top student while satoshi follows behind him. on graduation day they are put as leaders of 2 sepatate teams to capture the others leader they go all out and destroy the training course after that they are placed on a team with each other and a girl named reana who is madly in love with trakes but satoshi loves reana and trakes is trying to get power to kill the one who killed his clan because he has no memory that he did because of the seal that activates when an angel or demon awakeins thier powersthier teams leader is lady named kyga she can use force feilds at will thier first mission is to go to the earth realm to protect a girl that is adecendant from the godson thier way to the earth realm they are are ambushed by by assasins trakes and satishi use their angel/demon powers for the first time and wwin the battle while in the earht realm they spend months thiear fighting epic battles the next main battle happens after while they were walkin home from the school they had to go to protect the girl name kitomithey were attacked by high level assasins and a angel with blindfolds over his eyes with one wing too after the battle trakes has to make a decsion save reana or save kitomi in the end he chooses kitomi when she is about to get stabed he jumps the way and takes the hit to the shoulder then kills the assasins before losing concieness he see black feathers the same ones as his clans murderer kitomi takes him to her house to help him while hes recover they slowely strt to fall in love wich is forbiiden for trakes becuase she live in the unholy earht realm after everyone is healed the team heads back to the celestial realm for the protecter exams ( think of narutos chunin exams its like that) in the 2nd part of the exam wich is the survival part trakes meets the leader of the assasins who places a seal over his seal to control his demonic powers that when trakes finds out hes a demon ( satostoshi found out he was an angel by the one winged angel they fought)during the 3rd exam which is one on one fights trakes fights his older brother who was away on a mission during the massure he vowed to kill trakes for what he did in the end trakes gets half of his heart destroyed while his brother sadoko gets all of his heart destroyed this happens all in front of eveybody and trakes nephew sadokos son who then vows to kill trakes for his dad. during the final match wich is trakes vs satoshi theyre pwers collide wich teleports them to the same place there ancestors fought thats when trakes tells satoshi hes leaving to join the assasins and thats when the battle becomes emotionally crazy(and evey body from the exams are watching from the big screen becuse the screen homes in on the persons energy) during the conclusion of the fight trakes stabbes satoshi in the heart wich activates his full angel form which satoshi then starts to beat the crap out of trakes who then activates his full demon form in wich they stand on 2 differnt sky scapers oppisite from each other they charge up theyre final atack trakes uses lunar eclipes and satoshis uses solar shine they attacks collide and trakes is thrown into a buildin which collapses and satoshi is thrown in to a waterfall trakes then leaves to train for 3 year in the demon real and satoshi train for 3 years in the angel realm .... the end of the first series sorry i skipped a lot of other things and im going to add more stuff but please commentCCF06222012_00000 (2)CCF06222012_000004
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Manga Idea [19 Jan 2012|12:32am]
[ **mood** | excited ] Hey all,I'm a writer that writes lots of different stories from comics, mangas and novels.I've got lots of story ideas and I was hoping I could find some wonderful artists to create them into some real life comics.My plan is either to put them on a site caleld capsulecomputers.com.au that I have some connections with and we would put the comic/manga in it's own section to advertise it to the thousands of viewers that come to the site. The other plan is make the comic great and al then send it out to every comic publisher we know:DAnyway I have LOTS of story ideasIf you're interested in the least check them out: auraredwood.livejournal.com/tag/story idea :Dand I hope someone would like to go on this little journey with me :P-Aura Redwoodp.s. I edited this post so if the comments don't make sense....that's why :P
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New Manga [05 Jul 2011|12:41pm]
Hey guys!I found this community and thought it's really cool that beginning artists can share their manga here. I would be extremely happy if you could take few moments to check out my manga as well (I uploaded the first episode in a zip file to the link below)freakshare.com/files/3z8oxj1t/manga---GO-TO-HELL---JapaneseVersion.zip.htmlWould really appreciate if you could comment/message to my journal!! (*PS: read the manga from right to left)
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Check out my comic, Eiliminti! [13 Jun 2011|12:13pm]
[ **mood** | chipper ] Long ago there were 5 Kingdoms. They all lived in harmony, and everything was peaceful. That was, until a 6th Kingdom appeared and took over the land. The only ones that could stop them were the 5 princesses with the power of the elements... But they failed... Now nothing is in the way of the 6th Kingdom controlling everything and everyone. In the realm of earth, a group of friends are confronted by the spirits of the 5 princesses, and allow for the spirits to become one with them with the promise that they will save their world. The spirits as their guides and teachers, and their new power awakened, The girls enter the world of Eiliminti.Please check it out!... the intro might not have turned out that well, but I was still experimenting! I have a set way now, and I'll fix the Prologue when I have time.http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=95997
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New Manga? [08 Aug 2010|07:48pm]
I've been plotting this one for about... oh... eight years now. Unfortunately I have only recently taken up practicing my drawing. I am trying to update at least once a week. My premise is kind of clichéd as far as manga plots go, but the target audience is younger teens. And my drawing isn't the best. Am open to concrit but, please be gentle--mainly because I know my art isn't the best, AND I am pretty much working with pencil and paper scanned then cleaned up with Paint and Gimp.Plot: Kamino Neko is a normal high school girl... or "normal" if having the ears and tail of a cat can be considered normal!! Little does she know that her life is about to change when a classmate named Hogosha Hanako decides turn her world upside down.http://gracefulfire.deviantart.com/gallery/#Kamino-Neko
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Hello~ [05 Feb 2010|03:22am]
Hello~! I'm not sure if people still come here but I'll give it a shot. xDI'd like to know, if you read this summary on a manga, would you like to read it/buy it? xDThis is a project I'm working on, to be released in a couple of months if things go well.I guess what I'm really asking is, what do you think?
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hi [13 Dec 2009|11:06am]
[ **mood** | bouncy ] hello i have been drawing manga since forever i hope to make a living from it some day, anyway i joined because this seems like good community to get some feedback for my art. ummm yea i don't know what else i should write so here is some of my stuff
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My Oc [13 Dec 2009|03:27pm]
[ **mood** | cheerful ] Here are some of my old drawingsthey are the protagonists of the story I made back then...Title: Evil TwinsStory and Art by: Eyesberg (it's me! ^^)I usually write in notebook, I take 5 notebooks in writing this story but I couldn't finish this hehe I hope in my sixth notebook I will be able to finish this.The story is about the twins Rinen and Hikoto who are cursed by the dark magic masters, because of the curse they are being targeted by the hunter named Saber, Their village was attacked by this Hunter and they are the only ones who survive the incident because they have a unique ability that can transport them to other worlds. While using this ability they get separated and they lost their memories, After Five years they lived in other world peacefully but they cannot escaped their destiny of being curse...And this is my new version of the evil twinsName: Rinen(girl) and hikoto(boy)+++++++++++++++++++++++++visit my online gallery:eyesberg.deviantart.com
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#1 - Sexy, mysterious woman [24 Oct 2009|10:48am]
[ **mood** | excited ] I would like someone to looks at my sketch of a woman. Any feedbacks are welcomed [even these harshest ones, but please don't be too harsh on me^^] Please tell me what is ok, on what I should focus more etc. Thanks in advance!
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「tROLL gAME」 [25 Sep 2009|04:32pm]
「tROLL gAME」Trevor Downs is not a murderer but he killed a girl.Trevor is mysteriously invited to a competition where the contestants must troll the general public for points.The one with the most points after a one month period wins $10 million.
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Hi! [23 Sep 2009|03:21pm]
[ **mood** | relaxed ] Hello everyone, I am very new to this community and also kind of to livejournal, I'm a lurker but I am trying to be more active lately.Oh and my english ain't that wonderful, by the way.I wanted to show off some of my comics.My main one being The Wonderland Project, Uhm....I am VERY bad at making these shortcuts things and links o_OPhotobucketI would like to hear what others think of it, I'm sorry for the awfull last 2 pages, I was experimenting, but the next page will be a LOT better, that's a promise!I am having another comic in mind, but I am still figuring things out and stuff, but when it's ready to be shown I will! ^_^
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Feedback for the first page? [20 Sep 2009|10:36pm]
(Cross-posted several places.)I'm not yet "officially" posting the comic or anything, but I feel like the first page could use some feedback, since so far the only one who's seen the thing is me. Rating: G**( Can anyone actually read what this says?Collapse )**This is the only page that'll have fancy bubbles/text like this--the rest will have Comic Sans (+ my handwriting in places). Thoughts? I'm open to non-bubble related feedback as well.
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UPDATE: Vampire Fetish [18 Aug 2009|03:45pm]
SHAMELESS PLUG.-------------------------------------------Jude Hawthorne is...not so good at writing.Rejection after rejection stamps him as a world-class failure.However, he's unexpectedly gifted in the timeless art of flirtation and seduction. It sure comes in handy for his other profession...Join Jude, amateur novelist/professional vampire hunter, as he shamelessly ensnares the creatures of the night!------------------------------------------- ( PREVIEWCollapse )
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Brand Spanking New Manga! [03 Aug 2009|03:08pm]
[ **mood** | bouncy ] Hi, I've been working on my own manga for quite a while now, and I've just finished a complete re-draft of the first chapter. I'd really love to see what you guys think of it. (I'm also new here ^__^ hi!) Title: Fallout Genre: action/ adventure Warnings: angst (and a lot of it!) some violence, blood etc, but pretty moderate (I think...) Also, it's got to be read right to left. I hope that's not a problem for too many of you! ( Fallout: chapter 1 (15 pages)Collapse )
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Freydis the Red (also known as Åsa Teaches Herself Illustrator™) [31 May 2009|02:33pm]
Freydis the Red is my first attempt at writing and drawing a full-length short story. It's based off of the life myth of Freydís Eiríksdóttir, daughter of Erik the Red.Freydis is a villain. She is also an explorer, a mother, wife, and proud warrior. She's deceptive, unyielding, and cruel. It's still a work in progress, but I hope to get more of it up after school is dealt with. Feedback would be lovely.
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New here! 8D [30 May 2009|10:42pm]
[ **mood** | tired ] This is the first three pages of my original comic SOLARIUM, inspired by the Danny Boyle movie Sunshine. SOLARIUM.Chapter 1:I Miss the LightPage 1Page 2Page 3Never been too good at making pages flow well >_>
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