A World That I Rule (original) (raw)

First of all it's hentai and probably will have some spoilers. So be avare of that.

Story:
Mc was alpha in school and looser in life.. got isekai to elf world where they had all what they needed, farm, food and locals loved sex and everyone was were friendly. 1st girl he met almost instatly had sex with him.. And guess how he repais them? By killing local guy coz he had sex with "his girl" since when she was his? after that he kills girl just after having sex with mc coz saw dead body.. 2 ppl dead..
Lets make it short in this part..... mc created rules no body needed coz he wanted rule over them.. thx to that "his girl" lost her life and basicly every local died.. + created deam monsters.. He could have build houses or something like teach them something usefull but no... At the end his son got back to dads world and started to ruining it too.. like father like son.. I hate this mc and stupid story.. Yes its hentai and so but this story is garbage.

Art:
Art is great what can i say complete oposite from story 10/10

Character:
Mc is retard and there were two nice girls with gave their life over this retard mc.. Just coz of one trash mc character 1 point and those two girls... around 7 balls.

Enjoyment:
Hevent done what supposed to be done while reading this coz of trash story, i readed till end coz wanted see mc suffering.. but at the end everyone else suffer the most..

Overall:
Lets just say its decent, art is good but thats all.
God,, it might be to long review for a 41 chapther hentai but i want good story not this crap. Let me tell you this: Don't bother reading this crap if u dont liike retarded mc's.