Here comes the rain again falling from the stars.. by Orfartina on DeviantArt (original) (raw)
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It seems a little bit too bright for a night scene, but that may be just me. I wonder what the light source is, though. I guess it's the moon. The lighting is pretty well done, except that I'd have expected it to be more... blue? I don't really know how to explain it.
Also, there should be more shadows under her fringe, but other than that, her expression is really good. I'm particularly fond of the eyes on this drawing.~
Overall, the piece is nice. The thing that mainly bothers me is the background here. The stars are a bit sloppy in my opinion, but I'd understand if you don't have a star, or star-like brush. Also, the scene of night in the mountains with grass isn't original at all and has been repeated many, many times to the point it became generic, but if you weren't much inspired for the background, again, I'd understand. I, overall, find your artwork pretty well done!
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