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| Title: EquilibrimFandom: ST: Deep Space NineAuthor: karreniaCharacter: Jadzia Dax and Benjamin SiskoRating: General AudiencesSet shortly after "Invasive Procedures"word count: 724 Type of beta: grammar, general commentary, flow, etc. Turnaround time: no deadline, I'm flexible. Reply to the post, or email me: karrenia_rune@yahoo.com Thanks in advance and take care, KarreniaLocation:hereMood:cold cold Title: Live WireFandom: Static Shock (cartoon)Author: karrenia (Karen)Characters: Virgil Hawkins (Static Shock) and Richie (Gear)Rating: PGRecipient: liraelRequest Details: http://community.livejournal.com/fic_on_demand/918485.htmlDisclaimer: Static Shock belongs to the WB, DCU comics, and its producers and creators; it is not mine. It's my first time writing in this fandom, while I've seen the episodes of the show, so I hope it fills the bill of what you had in mind when you made the request. . ( livewire Collapse ) Type of beta: grammar and general contunity, and general comments would be lovely. It is not necessary to be familar with the fandom, but it always helps. I don't know if I've gone over the 750 word limit, but thank you in advance and take care, KarreniaLocation:hereMood:curious curious My beta is on her honeymoon at the moment, so I need a bit of help. The problems are mainly going to be punctuation, maybe a few misspelled words. Thanks for your help. Title: The End (maybe)Fandom: Harry PotterWord Count: 638Warnings: None**( Read more...Collapse )** Title: There's Not A MorningFandom: Kingdom HeartsWordcount: 577Characters: Riku, Malificent, extensive mention of Sora.Warnings: Spoilers for KH1, zomg. :o Written with a mild attempt towards Riku*Sora subtext, but if you can play the game without seeing the stuff, you can probably read this without seeing it, too. Nothing NSFW or otherwise objectional, though.Critique: IC-ness, style/clarity (some of the sentance structure confused my brother?), Notes: Set sometime during KH1, after Riku joins Malificent, but definitely before Neverland. Otherwise, place it where it pleases you in the timeline.Inspired by the song "With Every Breath I Take" from the musical City of Angels (no relation to the movie), of which the duet reprise fits Sora and Riku really well in spirit, if not in word. (Well, IMO it does.)Uploaded music-ness, just for you guys: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=7LE3LYGN (m4a/iTunes format)( There's Not A Morning Collapse ) Hi, newbie here. *waves* Let me know if I do anything wrong. :)Untitled (any suggestions?)Word count: 547Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis, John/MichaelWarnings: Hard R or NC17, male/male, sorta interspeciesLooking for: Anything, but especially anything that seems unclear, anything that seems cliched, anything that seems extraneous. And if you know the fandom, anything that seems OOC.( Read more...Collapse )Thank you so much! Title: LustFandom: Inuyasha Word count: 138 Warnings: Death, and mentions of sex. Critique type: Grammar, and style. Other: I have a question should I leave the tense as is or should I change it to past? Mood:blah I never thought I'd write something based directly on a rant in fanficrants. ^^;;Title: none yetFandom: Harry PotterLength: ~ 200 wordsWarnings: teenagers making out, crushing embarrassmentCritique wanted: General grammar, structure, etc., and some specific questions:Am I using the spells properly?Are the point deductions reasonable, or am I way off base for these kinds of infractions?The students' names -- out of place, or plausible for wizards?Would a wizard say 'hormones'? If not, suggestions?( Read more...Collapse )Mood:yay, new fandom to play in! Oh dear god this is silly. Title: Deleted!Fandom: _Doctor Who_Length: 100 words (boo yah!)Warnings: References to Season Two episodes 'Rise of the Cybermen' and 'Age of Steel'. And... is 'cracked-out crossover' a warning?Critique wanted: does anyone actually get the joke? Is it embarrassingly cheesy? Do Brits still use the spelling 'tyre'? Help. ^^;;( Read more...Collapse )Mood:weird 2.Title: Road TripFandom: Kingdom HeartsCharacters: Cloud, Demyx, Zexion, Saix, VexenWord Count: 139Rating: WorksafeSummary: A little roadtrip crack with the Order and Cloud.Critique: Any spelling, grammar or homophones.( Are we there yet?Collapse ) Previous 10 Entries Top of Page | | | 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