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akayath @ 2:23am: Remus and Sirius Argument Again! I cleaned up some of Remus' lines, and began to change it from a log into proper format (expand netspeak actions into sentences and use quotation marks and such), but I realized that not only was that stepping past a lot of bounds and extrapolating, but that I wasn't up for it. So I left the first two bits that way, but I now have a proposition. Why don't we go through it again in AIM, cut the dialgoue lines from here, and add the "he saids" and the actions to our character's parts? It'll make it easier if we both also talk over location and actions and such.

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