Short Film (original) (raw)

Here's a script for a short film I'm working on. It's based on the character who's narrated the first two stories, in this she's all grown up...and way more fun >:)

let me know what you think

The following looks as though it's shot with a camcorder carried by the the character 'ariebella'. At start the scene is being shot from her perspective.

At rise 'Ava Maria' sung by Luciano Pavarotti is playing. We see ariebella riffling through the drawers of a domestic looking kitchen. She holds various kitchen knifes up to the camera as if she is trying to select on of them. She tosses a few away then settles on one with a cerated edge.

The knife disappears (tucked away) and she goes out of the kitchen and up a set of stairs.

At the top is a hallway containing two bedrooms and a bathroom. The bedroom door closest has it's door open revealing Marcus lying listless on the bed, he is barely conscious. On the night stand is a glass crack pipe with black smudges on it, a lighter and an ashtray.

Marcus

That shit was harsh! Did you get it at the party? Wow, I've never had Crystal knock me on my ass like this.

The shot shows ariebella turning him over then duct taping his hands above his head.

Marcus

Wow, you're into some right kinky shit eh? Alright, whatever. Let me know when it's my turn to do you.

ariebella produces a pink jelly dildoe into the shot.

Marcus

Whoa! What the fuck. That's a little too crazy for me sweetie.

she shoves the dildoe down his throat then pulls it back out.

Marcus

You cunt! Did you listen to what I said? Alright, fuck this. Get off me! I'm outta here...

Marcus tries to move but to his suprise he's unable to budge under ariebella's weight. She takes the dildoe again and begins to sodomize him. Marcus screams in pain and disbelief.

Marcus

You fucking bitch! Fuck off! Get the fuck off me!

During this the shot pans to ariebella who is masterbating as she sodomizes Marcus. During this Marcus' screams become terrified and louder. After a minute she stops masterbating and tosses the dildoe aside. She then sets the camera down on the night stand so the shot is a side view of her on top of Marcus. She turns Marcus over, he is sobbing.

Marcus

Please, just fucking stop this already!

She pulls his shirt over his face and begins stabbing his face and his upper body with the knife from the kitchen. Marcus screams and struggles as blood flies out of him. After a few mintues he quiets down and stops twitching. He is dead.

ariebella picks up the camera and brings the shot over to Marcus' face which still has his blood-stained shirt pulled over it.

ariebella

First kill was young and lean. Was in the wrong place at the wrong time....first kill was nice.

The End!