Review of: "Determinants of Women Entrepreneurs’ Business Performance: Evidence from Micro and Small-Scale Enterprises in Arba Minch Town, Southern Ethiopia (original) (raw)

Overall, I find your paper addresses an important and interesting topic. I believe, however, that the paper needs to be further developed. Below are my observations and suggestions. The article proposes to fill the gap in the literature regarding the determinants of women's business performance with reference to MSEs in Arba Minch town Abstract: the abstract analyzes all the basic points it should contain, however I suggest shortening it especially in the part of the results obtained. Introduction: More references should be added in the introduction to corroborate the claims being made and more recent quotes should be preferred. When you write The dramatic expansion of scholarly interest and activity in the field of women's entrepreneurship, I would avoid using the term "dramatic" because it has a negative connotation.