Fight Like A Girl by 7caco on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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Let me start by expressing... how much I love this. It's beautifully done, and the image practically pops out! The attention to details is amazing.

But every artwork has pros and cons.

I feel there's a few mistakes, but I'm not about to assume anything. If you used a reference, then that would change things. But if not, then daaang! You're nearly spot on.

Now, perhaps it's just me, but as far as the woman's body here goes... I feel that her hips are a tad on the large side. Perhaps that was the intended purpose? But... I don't really know, but it seems to throw her proportions out of whack just a bit. So I'd either add some meat to her curves or shrink those hips down just a tad. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

Regardless, the picture is still well done! I love the way you did the face—but I noticed something off a bit. Her nose seems a little crooked around the nostrils. It could just be me, though. But when I looked at her face, that just caught my eye. I think moving the right (her left) nostril up juuuuust a hair, and it'd serve some justice!

For me, noses are one of the hardest parts of a human to draw—when drawing realism. So I understand errors when drawing them. XD

Other than those two things, everything else looks beautiful. And looking at the big picture, I think it wonderfully done.

I love the details in her hair, her eyes and most of all, her necklace. The folds in her shirt look amazing, and the coloring job is just as amazing. I love the little details like the bracelet on her wrist's engraved letters, the pattern on her panties, and the simplistic background.

With a simple background it brings forth the character more so than it would if you had an extensively detailed background. Over all, I love it. Keep up the good work, and keep my suggestions in mind for the future! Hopefully they will do you good~!