Sonic Colours Homing Attack by Aerobian-Angel on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

⭐⭐⭐⭐ Overall

⭐⭐⭐⭐:star-half: Vision

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Originality

⭐⭐⭐:star-half::star-empty: Technique

⭐⭐⭐⭐:star-half: Impact

Is it critique time? Yes, I believe it is. >x3

So, let's start with the things that I like about this.

- I really like how smooth this is. It really looks like the animation is a reality event. I love how you did that.
- I love how the sky isn't just a solid colour. It has some lighter areas, and a hint of purple-ish there. That really caught my attention.
- The way the ending blurs out, but the letters are so clear really caught my attention. Of course, people can do that in a program with layers, but the way you did it really caught my eye. Nice work on that.

Now, for this things I have a bad side for.

- The background is good, but I feel like it could use some more shading. It just looks too solid. Try to add a shading effect to the background, it'd look more real.
- I think the smoke that goes behind Sonic when he runs into that den could use some blur to it. It kinda looks too solid to me. If you add some blur to that, it'd look more real.

So, other than those, I really love this animation! You did a great job on it, and I can't wait to see your future works!