portrait wind by agnes-cecile on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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Firstly, this work is of the most divine pulchritude. And secondly, I'm new to DeviantArt, but I just needed to give you feedback on this awesome drawing.
I love it, its absolutely stellar.
However, I think the shading looks a bit rushed in the neck area, and could use a diminutive bit of more work to improve it and create a smoother transition.
Your skill really does show in the hair, which I think is this piece's greatest attribute and I'm sure you meant it to be with its dynamic movement. I must also point out the eyes are also beautifully drafted, they almost have a scintillating quality to them. I am no professional, and your definitely better than me, but I can see that you put a load of work into your artwork despite the small shading issues I pointed out. I'm sure a bit more patience on top of all the time you've already put into this piece could iron out any of these issues and your artwork would appear even better. Laziness is what kills me when I draw sometimes <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>.
But keep up the good work, your work is inspirational and just tiptoes away from being epitomic.