Tomb Raider Reborn - Contest by AimFreaky on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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This is a lovely piece. I really like her expression. It's evident you put a lot of work in this! I love the details in the hair--it really tells a story. It seems like you tried to lay out some composition, but it's hard to define it. Maybe next time make the whole piece follow a shape, like an infinity sign. Try to incorperate all of the hair into the shape you made in the strand of hair at the bottom right.
The left side of the face is caved in a little too much, but the eyes are beautiful. The color scheme you chose is very fitting, and the watercolor suits it, too. One thing that sticks out to me, though, is the Asian woman drawn in the middle. She is vertical, and the whole piece seems more horizontal. I also think the thickness of the hair ends abruptly, maybe change it to have a longer fade. I do really like the different colored hands pattern in it, and the change from skulls to candles to fire. Like I said, it really tells a story-- like she's remembering her past. The nose is perfect, although I feel the color of the lips is a little too vibrant in these colors.. But really, this art is beautiful. I hope my critique was constructive and helpful, because I want you to focus on the good things, and the things that could be worked on next time. Very well done. I definitely enjoyed this piece.