So much Liberty by AmyKPhotos on DeviantArt (original) (raw)
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I'm actually not sure how to divide a critique about this collab between the two of you, so I won't do it at all and I'm gonna rate it like any single deviation.
First off, after watching you for a while, I can only tell that you're getting better and better and you've got a lot of talent when it comes to urban photography.
So what have we got here: a clear vision, a classic symmetrical bridge shot taken on long exposure to create those lively light lines leading the viewer directly down the old bridge. The only thing that might disturb the view might be the flare of the lights in the upper part of the image, especially on the right side. I think I would have tried to reduce that in the editing process.
Technically, you didn't do anything wrong, but I'm curious why you've used F/32? I can't think of a situation where I had to push the aperture to it's maximum.
Anyway, you've created a neat dark/light situation here and I really like the contrasts here and how the steel bridge is slightly disappearing in the darkness of the night, so the impact is just wow!