Sixth Destroyer Division + Murakumo by AssortDis on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

Looks like you're really on a roll, considering how many pics you've finished in several days.

Personally I don't have much to comment. All in all you need to work on the consistency of your lines, especially on character proportions and perspectives. But this is acquired through time, so by drawing often like you do now will make you get better.

As for this drawing, I think what glares the most is the perspective of the characters against the background. Either make the BG to be not-so-distant, or make the characters more distant, following the BG. The 2 left-most characters should be a lot smaller IMO to make them feel distant as in the BG.

On a positive side, you do have dynamic pose and expression which I like. Your coloring is also getting better.