my only hope by auroille on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

Pretty Good focus. I like how the back lighting looks almost like a halo. I think I would've probably revealed more of the head to better emphasize the halo-like feel.

I'm not sure what composition you were going for. I don't feel like the extra negative space helps draw my attention to the model's eyes or face. I'm a really big fan of rule of thirds so I would've probably cropped this shot as such: [link]

I don't like how one of the model's eyes is darker than the other. It's just a result of the lighting and not that easy to fix except with selective burning in post editing. I feel like I should be drawn to the left eye (left as seen) but because of the right eye's lack of contrast and lightness, I am instead drawn to the right, darker eye. Just something to keep in mind in the future.

Hope this helps