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Published: Jul 5, 2016
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The idea was this person with a bird of the light who lived in a very dark world, finally setting the bird free. bullcrapped the story as I went along.
I don't expect anyone to like this because I sure as hell don't, so roast away (as long as it's constructive)
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100% IN ALL DEPARTMENTS TYM HAVE A NICE DAY OOH OKAY I REALIZED THAT I NEED TO HAVE AT LEAST 100 WORDS FOR THIS CRITIQUE TO BE VALID THIS IS VERY EASY AND NOT SOMETHING I'M WORRIED ABOUT IM JUST GOING TO KEEP TYPING STREAM OF THOUGHT AND SEE WHAT COMES UP OOOOH LOOK A PONY AHWAT I DONT SEE A PNY INMA DCRAZY DONT DO THAT MANOA MOM DNO NO HAH ATHA WAHO WHO? 25 WORDS LEFT AND NOW 20 OOOOPS LOOKS AT THAT ITS A WHOOPING 12 WORDS UH OH WE ARE ABOUT DONE NOW OKAY TY BYE!