Heir of the mountain king by Bisanti on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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Beautiful piece of art! I love this sketch!

Critique- I would even the left(in our view the right) eye with the other eye. I would show more separation of the fur in the right check at the end where it goes into the neck. I would squish SLIGHTLY the nose downward. I think that dark line down the middle of the chest should not be there even in a walk, have a little separation with the chest and upper legs. His shoulder should show a little more detail as well.

I love the crease of skin in the forehead his ears and mouth! I love this piece and look forward to seeing more of your art!

These all are just my opinions and I hope you have a great day/night!

-Niteku