Sin by BrittanyJM on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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I like the picture as a whole, I think its a great way to express kind of a mysterious feel to the image and kind of bring an old feel to it with the hat and the bright read lipstick, and her eyes with a greenish tint looking right at you kind of piercing and strong.

There are just a few things I would say I would like to see differently, One is on her finger pointing up to her face on the left side of the photo, I would like to see the hair edited out just because everything else seems so clean crisp and precise, then just on that one finger you see all these small shadows and hairs, the same I think goes for on her left eye the stray grouping of hairs needs to be taken out to give it that crisper feel. Another thing I'm not a big fan of is the pinky fingers shadow, possibly something to look out for when you shoot again, its not that the shadow doesn't look great its more so the placement of it, all the others seem to be going in the same direction and each kind of building on top of the other and that is the only one overlapping creating kind of a mustache feel in a sense.

All and all I think it is a very stunning photo with great use of shadows and a very good focus, just a few minor details with the hairs that I think could be worked out to make it even crisper and maybe up the green a bit in her eyes, not to over power the red or compare to them in saturation or color, but just to take the photo to a new level.