Melody of Loneliness by caddman on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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Our 6th collaboration with a wonderful artist it was really a pleasure working together and she help bring my poem come to life
Thank you so much Hazel for everything!

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Back Story

MELODY OF LONELINESS

What do we see but a man standing alone on a dock?
A dim dark day with thoughts racing inside his head
Mystery birds flying overhead singing a melancholy tune

Another day in the game of life... Is he still empty inside
As the fear of the sound of tick-tock of time unable to move
He’s has become a prisoner of his own mind

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The Poem
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MELODY OF LONELINESS

I got a feeling
That I can’t let go
And there is nothing
But to go with the flow

All hope is gone
Cast my sorrows
To the wind all
Hope looking dim
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I am Stone
into the moment
stopped in time
Got to fight it

How can I feel
This moment
From this moment
How do I feel at all?
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I am numb
Frozen by the sign
Disappointment in
With every line

Has it come to this?
recheck the list
for Am I slowly
Falling into the abyss
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Standing alone
Inside my mind
Third eyes blind
Spinning in total rewind

Numbers that were more
Now Has become less
Everything else
Is my final test?
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Should I stop
And fade away
With dead memories
Only in dreams will I stay

Stocks and Resources used:
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stock.adobe.com/images/man-sta…

... landscape
www.deviantart.com/arctichorse…

... fog
www.deviantart.com/malleni-sto…

... birds
www.deviantart.com/selunia/art…

... white birds
www.deviantart.com/momotte2sto…

... Violin
www.deviantart.com/ashensorrow…

... suit case
www.deviantart.com/tigers-stoc…

... dock
www.deviantart.com/anneriresto…

... city
www.deviantart.com/sohappilyar…

... texture
www.deviantart.com/sirius-sdz/…

... texture
www.deviantart.com/noema-13/ar…

... clock
www.deviantart.com/sparky458/a…

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