Creepypasta Inktober (Day 16): Jane The Killer by ChicoFNAF on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

Thoughts about the Creepypasta: Like Jeff's, her story isn't good, mostly because she doesn't get to do anything and most of the time is just retelling the story of Jeff The Killer, but in Jane's perspective, however, for Jane herself is an interesting character, mostly because of her hunting down the one that destroyed her life, similar to other characters in media that have the same purpose, and I'm sure that Jane can be represented better with a reimagining, such as me because I made a reimagined story based on her

Reimagined Story I Made: So in this version, she's a detective working for the Police Department, along with having a family with her husband and daughter, and she was tasked to find the one and only Jeff The Killer, since in the past weeks (after the events of Jeff's story), reports of him have been seen him around the town, and bodies have been found with many sliced wounds and carved smiles on their faces, as the weeks go by, Jane started to feel rather badly, having nightmares about him, confusing innocent people with white hoodies as Jeff, and not being able to sleep to see where he might hide, however, one day on her job, she was unexpectadly called by her husband, saying that Jeff was in their house, Jane rushed down from the police station to her home, and when she met Jeff, both had a knife fight for several minutes, until Jeff used cleaning chemicals and melted her face, being able to escape afterwards, and as for her husband and daughter, they were sadly killed by him with the sliced wounds and carved smiles that Jeff does, leaving Jane completely shocked and traumatized, with a new goal to hunt down Jeff and arrest him for good, even if it means to leave her home and quit her job

About the art: In many depictions of Jane, she's often seeing with a black dress, the white mask, and white skin, honestly is very basic that she would look like a different character, so for my version, Jane had a massice lookover, instead of her dress, I gave her a detective coat since like I said, she worked at the PD, complete with grey pants, black leather boots, and a kitchen knife taken from her kitchen, as for her skin, since I only focused on her face, she would still look normal, a lighter skin to be specific, meaning her hair is natural then a wig, and the mask doesn't change a lot, outside of just some shadowing on the cheeks to look like a porcelain doll