Umaru by Dangaso on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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So this is for the project comment group, your my first one. I think this is really good! I probably would have tried to clean the lines up a bit but you said it was only about 30 minutes that you took to draw this right? So really It is amazing for the amount of time you put into it! One criticism that I do have is the eyes are a little flat looking I probably would have added a darker color to mimic a pupil to give the eyes a more curved look but that is just me and I have a tendency to draw more realistic eyes even if it is just an manga art styled drawing so ignore me<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>. Even so I love the eyes, you do a really good job of getting the colors just right. I also really love the hands and clothes, you really have an excellent grasp on both to the point I'm super jealous! Sorry I couldn't be more help... the only other thing I can really come up with it to darken the shading in the chip bag but over all I am in love with this drawing and will be following you from now on! Thanks for drawing such a nice piece! I really enjoyed it!