Visual Novel Project by DanteKaiko on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

:star-half: :star-empty: Overall

:star-half: :star-empty: Vision

:star-half: :star-empty: Originality

:star-empty: Technique

:star-half: :star-empty: Impact

Yeahhh >: D
I am just going to write you a critique <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

First of all, I love the colours and the light, it gives a warm feeling♥
And the pose is just adorable♥

The only thing I inmediatly saw, is that the breasts look.. Odd >-<
Well, because this is anime style, it isn't that weird, but, if you would
look at it more realisticly, they are too round c:
Like balloons <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
But, the anatomy otherwise, is great ^^

And, then, the last thing c:
The books on the background aren't shaded ^^
Which is too bad, because it would look even better if they were c:

But, I really love it!
Good job <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

(I don't really know what vision is ----->
So I just gave you 3.5 stars xD)