FMA - LUST by DarkShadowArtworks on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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I think I could have added a sparkle in the eyes and add shadows and sparkle in the drawing, especially details in the eyes, and make it in a different pose because a lot of people have already drawn it with this pose, but you're already giving it a certain step, the anatomy is fine, also add details to the lips and hair too, I do not know if you did it because wanted to make her more like a cartoon, being honest I'm not good with criticism, it must be because I still have not mastered the skill to draw, I hope I have helped. bad english XDD