Airheart: Chapter 2 by DeeForty-Five on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

Published: Apr 3, 2023

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So last chapter I talked about how I started in Lumiose early because there's not a lot going on in early Kalos. Here we see the next step of my changes: an early meeting with Team Flare! (Or L'enfer, as they'll be called.) I think that X and Y suffer a lot for a sluggish early game; it takes forever to get to Lumiose and meet the professor, and the gap between badges 1 and 2 are enormous and Team Flare only shows up right before the second badge. It's a pretty late introduction to the villains! So I decided to fix it.

This is mostly just a narrative battle, not representative of anything in-game. Still, I hope you like it. Thanks for reading!