RQ:Sheva by Dragnoodlez on DeviantArt (original) (raw)
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As well as commenting, I'm gonna write a critique. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="LOL"/>
First of all, I LOVE that background. It's simple yet effective, and it suits the theme very well. The pose is pretty good, just one tiny thing; It looks a little bit like her belly is raised off the ground. Not that it matters, it's still a great picture!
You've also forgottern to erase a few lines, like on her left bracelet and in the hair. The shading could be just a teeny tiny bit darker, and I noticed you cut off a bit of her right cheek, it look a bit flatter than her left one.
Sorry if I was too harsh. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/>