Make me feel alive ~ page 1 by Drawing-Heart on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

Cover: drawinggirl546.deviantart.com/…
Next: When I make it, a teenage girl can only draw THAT fast xD

So here's the first page
I already explained the comic on the cover but I also have to say sorry because of the derpy first page, my mom got me angry at one point and I've just lost my concentration and nerves

So story line before
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For a month now Fionna hasn't seen Marshall... He said he wanted to be left alone so he spent his days in his cave, doing nothing but just writting songs and laying around
However Fionna felt worried for her dear friend and decided to go and pay him a visit...

~ I had a better idea but I had to turn off my computer for some time and didn't write it anywhere

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If you haven't noticed...

~ I drew ML's bitemarks
~ The snail
~ They're at strawberry fields
~ I don't know what more to write

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Like I said...
I NEED A FANGIRL SOUNDTRACK *-*
for every time ML appears on the page *-*

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Translation by

Fionna: Cake estoy preocupada por Marsh
Cakeorque?
Fionna:No lo e visto por un tiempo...
a pasado sus días en la cueva solo...
Cake:Tal vez no deberíamos interferir con eso Fi
Fionna: Mira cake,
tu puedes darte la vuelta
y ir a casa cuando quieras
Cakekay, pero nada de cosas raras
Fionna:Espero que este bien,
el ocupa un lugar especial
en mi corazón
Marshall:Que lugar?
Fionna:Marsh,
Oh umm...
es solo...
bueno...
Marshall:Esto puede durar un tiempo
Una hora y media después...
O no..
No soy un reloj
Fionna:Y después yo...
Yo solo estaba
Bla bla
Marshallueno basta ya,
que quieres de mi?

Thanks again