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Star Heart Sample: Detective Red

Author's Note: Hey everyone! This is another sample chapter of Star Heart with revisions already made. ^^ At the time of me posting this, the book's text is about 60% of the way done. The Adventures of Otto's current draft, however, is complete. But it'll still take time to make the proper revisions and draw the illustrations. So while we wait on them, here's a look at one of the more complete episodes of the superhero's adventures. If anyone has any comments or advice to improve bits of the story, please let me know Thanks for your continued support, and I hope you enjoy the show! ^^ Even with her status as a superhero, it wasn't easy for Captain Red to be out in the open. With all the pedestrians and spectators walking along the sidewalks, she could barely go anywhere without eyes drawn to her. A child pointed his finger at her, calling her a raccoon, while teens prowled the streets trying to take photos of her riding on Star Heart's shoulders, even going so far as to walk in the