Request- SensuSekai by Futella on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Vision

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Originality

⭐⭐⭐⭐:star-empty: Technique

⭐⭐⭐:star-half::star-empty: Impact

I like the expression on this and the coloring is pretty good but there is some stuff structurally wrong.

First of all, although the coloring on the hair is very different and well done but it should flow more naturally with the shape of the pieces of her hair.

Her face should be a little more centered and the blush is a little too extreme on one side. You might want to make her nose and mouth a little more prominent- it gets the expression a lot better then.

Her earring should be tucked a little farther behind her head and perhaps a second one should be visible slightly on the other side.