Freckles by Kaiya-Ashigawa on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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So like, I just got my premium membership again and I thought, "Hmm... I love to critique, let's see what's out there right now."

I went through a few pages and saw this. It stood out above the rest of the critiqueables, and it made me just go "aww" when I saw it.

Your sister's character looks very playful and kind, and has a face that says: If you need a friend, I'm the right choice.

I just want to hug this little guy, the expression is so cute! If I would have to say something "bad" about this, it would be only that I would change the background to something else. The colors aren't bad, I just feel a different scene is in order.

Other than that, it is a great, adorable piece of art <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/m/m…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Meow :3"/>