Moonlight Maidens - Kathalia Bisclavret by Kathalia on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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Looking at this, I would be inclined to think you have used a mix of different colouring tools, which is a good thing. I particularly noticed how the furry woman looks as though the markers were well suited for her clothes and fur. Her fur texture is a nice start especially on her tail, but falters on her exposed midriff and limbs. Although you rippled her clothes quite well and her sword hilt is shaded quite well and so are her armour pieces, a sense of shine could well improve the moon effects in the background and so could her claws in their lacks of shine. While the stone floor and brick wall in the midground are reasonably well detailed, the hills in the background look inconsistent and off balance, with levels on the right side looking intricate and the grass texture meagre, and the left side the opposite case. Also, her breasts and arm braces look uneven and look uneven by the angle she's facing, but her fur gradients are well blended along with her hair. Balance out the detail in the midground and background details, and you will have an excellent piece to go off of, but you are otherwise off to a very good transition.