King Cryptid by lukesmithart on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

Friendly Feedback Attack (FFA)!

Hello, fellow teammate of Gingerbread Gang! :giggle:

Love the thick outline and tonelines and his pose, I think it's make him more "king"!

and here is a feedback :D

  1. Color is spilling outside of line. I prefer to clean up these color spill with eraser becuase It could make artwork more "clean".
  2. A lack of contrast for foreground and background. I thought that mountain and hill was same thing. you could adjust some brightness of color for this!
  3. Wrong light direction. Moon is placed behind of him and it should be create rim light. it looks not right unless there is another moon or light source.

This artwork can be more awesome for sure! I hope these feedbacks are helpful to you. Happy #Critmas ! :D