.:Kiriban:. Miho by MayaNara on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

Hello, I'm going to leave a critique, since this was in the critique folder in #OC-University. (I see someone else has left a critique already, so I'll try to touch on other topics and elements!) C:

To begin with, you've done a pretty good job on her hands! Hands can be a pain to draw, and you've illustrated the folds and bends quite well. The shape of the arm is also accurate and very natural.

The one thing I want to point out is the clothing folds. They look kind of unnatural at places, such as the sleeves. I think you were trying to five the wrinkles/folds variety by doing different folds on the sleeves (which is a good thing), but that causes it to look uneven. For the left sleeve, the wrinkles are horizontal, whereas the ones on the right are vertical (almost like it's pleated). Usually, folds go in the same general direction if it's on the same body part, unless the pose is asymmetrical and pulls the fabric in different directions. Here's a two-part clothing tutorial that may help some: [link] (There's a link to part 2 in the description.)
Hope this helps! C: