Homeworld Sapphire by Melabrook on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

Would you mind if i add a bit of critique? The eye is off, it's not alined with the lips. It's sorta leaning off to the right, which doesn't look right.
It also seems a bit small for the rest of the face. The light source is androgynous, the light shadows and the dark shadows don't have a definite spot on the form of Sapphire. Draw real life objects and think about their shadows. Understanding is extremly important, know the laws of light and shadows! Also, her pose is too stiff, and her clothes are also too stiff. To fix the pose? Do figure drawing, it's super helpful! The clothes? Try and think, understand how the clothes work, the drapes and folds, what they look like and how they move. Also, think about what she is doing, why is she just standing there and smiling ( seductively lol ) Give her something to do! Mabye she's stress eating chocolate and thinking about a certain Ruby's butt. Or... mabye Sapphire is thinking bout a meme or something idk.
I hope this helps! Otherwise, DAMN, this is a good drawing. Just the little things you need to fix, you know? And I gotta say, so far your on the right track!