FREE star avatar by MixedMilkChOcOlate on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

:star-half: :star-empty: Overall

:star-empty: Vision

:star-half: :star-empty: Originality

:star-half: :star-empty: Technique

:star-half: Impact

This is more or less copied off of my comment critique from a while ago <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/i/i…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Slow"/>. Just wanted to make it more official.

First off, I love the off centered wobble. It adds a nice touch and gives it sort of like it's a sketch or rough job, if you know what I mean. It looks very nice and I love the effect.

The shine is also very well done, and the way you shaded it makes the star seems like it has a rough texture. I don't know if that was your intention, but I like it.

The one thing that is bothering the crap out of me are the eyes. I don't like the fact that they stay the same angle throughout the entire animation, and it makes it seem really awkward. The mouth also isn't fantastic, and when it rotates it looks almost like it's closing and opening.

Another thing is at one frame after the face is straight up, the shading almost makes it look like it has a chubby chin. I don't know if this is just me or what, but I find it a little weird.

But other than that, this is a very excellent avatar that I am sure that many deviants will enjoy. The shading is phenomenal, and I love the shine. Keep up the good work =MixedMilkChOcOlate <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d…" width="21" height="15" alt=" :dummy: " title="I am a dummy!"/>