Water Unicorn by Natoli on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

Aw man I was looking up different textures to see what I could do with it when this caught my attention. I really like the textures! Especially the bubbles.

You seem open to critique on the anatomy too, so here's my two cents. ^^ I don't know if it was intentional, but I noticed that the unicorn's hooves are actually more like a deer's than a horses because it's split in two. The shoulder/base neck area of a horse is generally not so thick too. The're more lean. You could also make the head more horse-like (if that is your intention) by giving it less of a thicker eyebrow. They don't have very pronounced brows but they do have pronounced chins. If the unicorn is jumping, it would help if you raised the front legs more and is the unicorn is trotting/running, it'd help if the head was raised higher. Looking at the process of a horse running/jumping can be useful!

I hope I didn't bombard you with too much. You seem to like critique so I apologize if this is too much. Just wanted to add that I like the pen shading and the tail too!