Fiery by nikkidoodlesx3 on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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Hey guuuurrrrllll....

Sorry it took me so long to write this, but you life happens in between also...

But here it goes...

This is so very beautifully done... I love the colors you used together here and the fire is perfect. Mostly the lighting and perspective looks good to me also... I only have two things I can point out for you.

The way the light on the left should fall on the arm and leg due to the fire is a bit of. I would try to, rather than kind of outline with the glow, use a clipping layer and cover all of the arm and leg up to the knee and elbow... With the exception of the hand palm and the part of the leg underneath the hand, the hand should then basically cast a shadow on the part of the leg underneath it... On the right side I think the lighting is spot on!!!

And I'm so proud to see your hair is starting to look so much better!! Not quite there yet, but very close... All you are shorting now is thin strands of hair... I use this brush www.deviantart.com/art/Hair-br… I use no 1 and 4 for the initial laying out the form of the hair, and then I use 2 and 5 to go over everything again, creating more texture as I go along. Always start with the darkest color in the hair and work you way to the lightest colour. Let the ends of the loose strands of hair flow more by giving them a finer point in which to end (if that makes sense at all)

Over all I love this!!! Very awesome!! And I love that you made it your groups logo!!!

Love Leana