Albedo [Overlord] by NikkiReam on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

At my level and experience, I'm reluctant to give an "official" critique, but I'm still going to say this:

I really like the gestures made for this character and I like the way you colour hair - it just looks that good. As for what to improve, me first thing that comes to mind is applying more interesting values - currently the difference between light and dark areas isn't very big and thus the picture isn't as interesting to look at as it could have been. I also not sure if her left eye (right from our perspective) is placed correctly, it seems off a bit.

That being said, something positive to end this comment - I like how you use shadow. Particularly with the cleveage :3