NYBPAD319: Eyes On The Gold by NYBPAD319 on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

Characters

1. Dac Hoang Minh 🇺🇸(🇻🇳)🟠

2. Mai Khánh Minh 🇺🇸(🇻🇳)

3. Jake Billcheck 🇺🇸

4. Anh Minh 🇺🇸(🇻🇳)

Location

NYC, New York, USA.

First Scene

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Jake: *Laughs* Nah, but he got it twisted though. Anyway, I gotta make a withdrawal. I'll talk to you later.

Dac: Bạn thấy người đàn ông đó không? Tôi luôn ghen tị với sự thành công và tiền bạc của anh ấy. Đó phải là tôi. Mai, tôi cần bạn bảo anh ấy đưa thẻ tín dụng và mọi thứ cho bạn. Nếu anh ta không đồng ý, hãy thay mặt chúng tôi đưa ra lời đề nghị với anh ta.(You see that man? I've always been jealous of his success and money. That should be me. Mai, I need you to tell him to give you his credit cards and all. If he doesn't, make an offer with him on behalf of us.)

Mai: *Scared* Tôi sợ.(I'm scared.)

Anh: You better not be or you know what we'll do to you.

Mai: *Slowly about to cry* Okay, I-I will try.

Dac: Go and don't cry! *Sarcastically* If you do it, then maybe we'll be less harsh to you.

Second Scene

*Jake is calling 911.*

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Jake: I would like to report a man and a woman.

Anh: Dang it! You*Mai* didn't even try?! You are pathetic!

Dac: Just wait until we get back!

Mai: *Scared and crying* Mom, dad, I'm... I'm sorryyyy!

Description

I guess Jake was talking to one of his friends and that would be Brad Bennett. Soon, he switched to calling the cops the moment he spotted and recognized Mai's parents as he knows what they tried to do before. The gold sharpie was so strong that it kinda ruined the suit drawing, but it did cover up the mistake I made with his arm in the first scene where he holds his phone. I was worried I wouldn't be able to get the scenes right. Man, I was typing the description as fast as I could. Mai tried and failed. It's thanks to her crying and being scared.

Proto-Description

Mai's parents spot Jake and force Mai to get him with an offer to "treat her better" and Mai still shaken and scared tries to. She fails. Jake calls the cops on the parents. The parents flee with Mai and the parents have lost it.