Perfume of Adventure by Orioto on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

The only few critiques I have is the hutch in the foreground is not defined enough for the casual eye to make out. I do not think it is the blur necessarily but the texture gets lost in the tree behind it. This leads to a loss of depth on the left lower corner, which plays down the visual impact of the total piece. Holding my thumb over this corner greatly expands the overall depth and distance of the piece.

Feena's left arm and right leg are a little elusive as well. As an artist I can fill it in visually but my instant reaction to it is her silhouette is just a bit off.

Over all I enjoy the atmosphere of your pieces, they really tend to suck the eye in and refuse to let go.