Rose by p-l-u-m-b-u-m on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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Hey! amazing art ya got there! hope ya dont mind a critique!

Lineart: Very neat,smooth, clean lineart. I dont see any unnecessary lines, and the glow/ gradient effect you gave it is a very nice touch.

Color: Very neat, no color seems outside the line, and it doesnt appear to be sloppily done.

Shading and highlight: Mostly good, but i noticed the shading got a bit messy on parts of the dress, and it didnt appear very blended in.. But, it could be a stylistic choice, so idk. The highlight is quite good, and it appears to be coming from a source, nice work.

Background: It seems like not much at all was done here.. Maybe add a light source, or some simple color and shapes to have the illusion of a place.. I personally think it would make a nice touch.

Over all: its fairly good . Like any piece, it could use some work. The anatomy is nice, and has neat lineart and fairly clean coloring and shading. Nothing seems over done. I dont think fanart is ever too original, but this is nice. Maybe just work on parts of blending the shading on the dress, and add a bg, and you are good.

Grade i give: Around an A

Great work