Blue Kobold by Paradoxing5 on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

Hi. I am from @ProjectComment and I am giving feedback on artwork shared on the group.

I think the lines are good. They look clean, even and neat. There are no smudges or shaky lines. The lines also shows the shapes in a nice way. It is easy to see the character has a curvy and feminine figure. It says a lot about the character. I get an impression of she being someone who cares about her appearance, want to be feminine and show herself off. She look confident and she may work as a model or actress. Perhaps she is the ideal beauty and sensual to others of the same specie as her.

The smooth coloring and shadowing fits well with the curves and her feminine figure. It highlight her body and features. It also shows well where the lightning comes from and make the drawing look aesthetically good. I think the red and purple colors are compatible with the character's personality.

I do not think any improvement is needed here. Your execution works well with the style and genre you choose. This is what I expect a half human and a half animal in cartoon style will look like. It makes sense to highlight and sometime exaggerate the most important features - like her big hips and tail. The purpose of cartoon is to get a clear idea of what someone's personality and characteristics are like - without it looking like a photography.