tunnel2 by Radical-Jonny on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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Published: Nov 6, 2007

Description

Image size

1400x1069px 651.15 KB

Make

OLYMPUS OPTICAL CO.,LTD

Shutter Speed

10/2000 second

I think the contrast between the color and the black and white is too big, though I love the inclusion of the "tunnel vision" message on the side doubled with an actual view of the tunnel, and I understand how turning the tunnel b&w emphasizes the tunnel vision element. Maybe a little bit of color towards the edges or towards the center of the b&w portion would help convey tunnel vision? I don't know.

That's the sort of stuff I have to say during critiques at school.