Case Closed - Critical Role Fanart [Speedpaint] by SafirasArt on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

:star-half: :star-empty: Overall

:star-empty: Vision

:star-empty: Originality

:star-half: :star-empty: Technique

:star-empty: Impact

I will be quite strict, but, as it seems to me, strict criticism contributes to the progress of the artist.

The lighting is very badly thought out in your work. There are no falling shadows from the bodies at all and, therefore, they seem to be completely flat. If you wanted to show that the characters are in a place like a dungeon, then a good solution would be to portray the light falling on, say, the faces of the characters. This would emphasize emotions, improve the composition, add emphasis, and add drop shadows (improve volume).

In addition, there is not enough difference in tone. The skin, hair and clothes of the characters are almost the same in tone and, therefore, merge a little. I would suggest you make your hair and clothes darker. The skin of the characters could be made lighter, which, again, would add emphasis.

If we talk about the positive aspects of the work, I liked the emotions. They are very well.

If you want, then I could do a small overpaint on your drawing. Write if you are interested <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>