Youthful Training by SerenEvy on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

:star-empty: Overall

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:star-half: :star-empty: Technique

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Very nice piece I must say. Although I'm not a fan of NejiTen. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt=" :XD: " title="XD"/> Their poses are executed very well. Good proportions of their anatomy and such. The background fits well with the situation. It's not flat, it gives more of a 3D feel to the picture. I like the difference in skin tone too. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=" :heart: " title="Heart"/> The only improvements I could advise, would be you could make Tenten's shadow less of a square. You should show the shadow of her leg sticking out of the shadow. Also, you could add some weapons on the ground, to show that they've been training for a little while longer. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t…" width="15" height="15" alt=" :thumbsup: " title="Thumbs Up"/>