Fairy Fishing by SymbianL on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

:star-half: :star-empty: Overall

:star-empty: Vision

:star-empty: Originality

:star-empty: Technique

:star-half: Impact

It's the first time a critique is requested from an art I asked. It's also the same for all since I never make any kind of critique before [Mostly cause I'm not an artist and the fact my English sucks too much, making people's eyes blinding whend reading me. You're now warned!].

Anyway, everyone should begin and make the first step ahead, so here I go <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/m/m…" width="15" height="15" alt=" :meow: " title="Meow :3"/>.

Let's start with the main theme wich is about A Little Snow Fairy Sugar from Koge Donbo. Knowning you already watched the anime some years ago, there was no doubt left on the maneer you represented both Sugar&Saga. The spirit is there, making this picture very pleasent to watch on the first look <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>.

=> [Sugar] <=

As cute as expected, most of details are there even if I regret some missing points like a blue star on her shoes and some points on her skirt. For all of thoses things, I really can't expect something sophisticated since it comes as a free request and so you were not paid to make it. I'm pretty sure it should have shown with added details in case of commission.

=> [Saga] <=

My big regret is to see her eyes closed <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Sad)"/>. In ALSFS, each character are drawn with a special kind of eyes wich I actually love and I would have been honored to get your personnal touch on them. But in fact, it still my fault cause I should have told you how that particular point was close to my heart <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/s/i/s…" alt="" title="sighingplz"/>.

For the main result, and so if we also keep the details aside, I still have a good global feeling even if maybe some gradient on her skin would have been welcomed. it's a bit dull if you ask me, but nothing very important ^^.

=> [Background] <=

Simple, with a good choice of the main color and snowflakes falling around. It's enough for sure and does not worth to be counted on this critique.

=> [Global Feedback] <=

For a request, you did it pretty well! Nothing is perfect and even it there is some points that should have get more attention I can only be pleased to get it from you. This critique must not be considered as official and I hope to give you a more detailed and since one the day I commission you for real and with a lot of money on it. And thus if you want me to of course <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>.

Keep going, and have a lot of fun drawing stuff for all 0/